My first piece is actually my second major writing assignment, to define a word, phrase or thing. I decided to define the word "Nerd." I think I did pretty well on this paper. The thing I think I had the biggest problem with was my organization, and transitions. The definitions paper was probably the hardest paper for me to write. To me all of the arguments seemed kind of blended together, so it was hard for me to know where to end one paragraph and start a new one. But I really liked the visuals I made in my writing. Like when I talked about the movie “The revenge of the Nerds.” It really gave a good visual in people’s minds about what the stereotypical nerd looks like. Like when I wrote, "Most if not all of the people in this fraternity have tight high-water pants with suspenders attached to them, glasses and slicked back hair." Altogether, I thought the paper did a good job of defining the stereotypical nerd. I hope you enjoy it.
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